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Abner Gallery

Post Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:07 pm

Hi all

In this post I will put my images created with Blender and YafaRay, hope you like them, criticisms and comments are welcome.
Greetings from Nicaragua
Sorry for my bad English.
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:22 pm

Short reply - lights very good, looks naturally....
You must turn up path samples , AA looks good...
some elements looks not real /grass, textures of threes/.... WIP - it need upgrades

And heavy postpro , like every archviz...
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:54 pm

can you tell us a bit how you rendered it?
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:58 pm

Hello Abner, I agree with Hangar, the trees looks not realistycs... BUT it´s a nice job! I like it... Congrats, :P
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Tue Apr 05, 2011 9:51 pm

An attempt to reproduce this house
http://www.designboom.com/weblog/cat/9/ ... o-ide.html
but not the forest, I hope you like it.
Greetings from Nicaragua
Sorry for my bad English.
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:08 pm

Abner wrote:An attempt to reproduce this house
http://www.designboom.com/weblog/cat/9/ ... o-ide.html
but not the forest, I hope you like it.

Your model seems smaller than the original, but I like it!
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Wed Apr 06, 2011 10:26 pm

Samo wrote:can you tell us a bit how you rendered it?


Samo this a top View of the Scene whit the setting for pathtracing an the sky.
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Thu Apr 07, 2011 10:51 pm

MarcoA, creo q obviamente la reproduccion de Abner de la casa no seria identica... de todas formas, hay q reconocer que hizo un buen trabajo, a mi juicio claro!

Saludos Abner!
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Fri Apr 08, 2011 8:07 am

Mariela wrote:MarcoA, creo q obviamente la reproduccion de Abner de la casa no seria identica... de todas formas, hay q reconocer que hizo un buen trabajo, a mi juicio claro!


Of course it was just a little observation, not a criticism! :wink:
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:31 pm

man, pretty beautifull scenes you've got here, i really liked it. in the first scene, i just thought that you could make the ilumination more intense, but, like HANGAR said, you could improve the grass, trees, and, one thing that i found not very good: the ground texture.
good job
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Sat Apr 16, 2011 5:42 am

It looks good.

I agree with HANGARs critics.

Do you use Yafaray version 0.12 ?

Kind regards
Alain

PS. You don't have to excuse for your English in every post, it's ok if it's not perfect ;-)
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Sat Apr 16, 2011 4:40 pm

Hi
Thanks to everyone for your advice.
I still used yafaray 0.1.1 and blender 2.49.
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Sat Apr 16, 2011 9:31 pm

buddy, you are making a better job each render. i admit that i prefer the first render but the quality of the others is better.
also, man, you need to make a tutorial for me on how to make this grass :(
i have followed the documentation tutorial but the quality is not very good :/
keep up the work :D
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Sun Apr 17, 2011 6:02 am

hi,
good archviz renders.especially the grass looks very realistic.how much memory is needed to render grass like this?
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Re: Abner Gallery

Post Thu May 05, 2011 9:49 pm

HI
Another image critiques and comments are welcome.
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